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Advertising?

Is it just me, or does that first paragraph scream avertising? It uses a lot of adjectives and addresses the customer as "YOU", which suggests it was pulled from their own literature. I'll clean it up here a bit, and I vote we do the same on the front page since it's now the article of the week. -Chrobb 23:27, 3 September 2006 (EDT)